The dialogue in this book is awkward to put it mildly. There are a number of odd word choices throughout, with the Death Star being described in the opening scrawl as "The Empire's ultimate peacekeeping force" rather than "ultimate weapon" and Vader describing a Rebel attack by saying "They had... a certain success." rather than "They were successful." among others. My colleague Roy Buckingham of the Cult Film Fanatics podcast said it best - this entire comic reads like it was written by Tommy Wiseau of The Room.
At least the book looks good. Artist Salvador Larroca does a fine job capturing the appearances of the characters from the movies and in depicting the backgrounds of the various worlds well. And color artist Edgar Delgado manages some truly impressive lighting effects with the coloration.