Jeff Lemire tries his best to keep the story moving but the inertia of The Legion continues to hold him back. It doesn't matter that he slips in some quick gags such as Animal Man and Timberwolf sniffing each other. The story never bothered to explain who Timberwolf was for the readers who aren't already intimately familiar with every single member of The Legion, their powers and their personalities... or lack thereof!
The artwork this month is an improvement. Neil Edwards' figures are still forced and stiff, but this is less obvious in the splash pages that dominate the second half of the comic. Strangely, though this issue features two inkers, the finishes on the comic seem less erratic than they did last month when only one inker was assigned to the book.